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The Night Before Today
Contributed by
Claire
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:55:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Sitting beside a campfire made with
wood stolen unculpably
from a nearby construction site-
The Milky Way curves in a smile
above us as smoke
becomes our air pungently.
Copyright ©
Claire
... [
2004-04-02 10:55:40]
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Re: The Night Before Today
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by Necromant on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:39:52 PM AEST
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Hmm I enjoyed reading this, short but well written poem, I pictured the scene, great write!
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Re: The Night Before Today
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by morelikelyrics on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:37:10 PM AEST
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Short and simple, but so sweet and beautifully complex...
Nice write :)
~Morelikelyrics |
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