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The parts of life
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:34:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life....death?
which seems better?
which one will be less painfull?
i want to vanish,like a whisper in the breeze
to sail on the skies and burry my sorrows
to kiss and forget my love for you
depression hate anger
tears of blood trickle down my face
my insides are dying
my heart bleeding
if its the strongest muscle,
why does it break so easily?
how can one person do this to your soul
how?why?
i want to be blind and see darkness and see what i feel....see death all around me
is life as bad as death
or is death part of life
love is
emotions are
i dont want to be.......ever
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2004-04-02 11:34:07]
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Re: The parts of life
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by Necromant on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:41:21 PM AEST
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Ah I've been through what you're thinking, can't say I've managed to come out of it but I'm trying, hope you're doing too. Very well described poem!
Anne :D |
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Re: The parts of life
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by Justalady on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:25:08 AM AEST
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| A lot of questions for which there are no easy answers. Nicely put , coming from the very center of you .... your heart. The heart may be the strongest muscle but....... your will is even stronger. Hang in there. June |
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