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Shadows
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:40:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Shadows......
shadows creep
shadows follow
shadows glide
shadows hide
shadows glinse one hope of sun
but vanish when they try
tears unoticed
fall silently
and they creep and hide forever on...
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-04-02 11:40:52]
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Re: Shadows
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:05:23 PM AEST
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| i like this. good. short but sweet. welcome 2 ypdc! :) |
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Re: Shadows
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:59:05 PM AEST
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Hello Hannah and welcome to YPDC!
I have always had a keen interest in haunted houses. When you think about all that a house has seen from good to bad. The memories must be liken to a churning atmosphere inside.
*Rambles away*
I liked your poem, and thank you for sharing it with us.
Kie |
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Re: Shadows
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:42:39 PM AEST
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| Beautifully creepy..I am partial to shadows myself nice write! but in the end it is as if the shadows were sad...I wonder why....the sad haunting perhaps..just my meandering thoughts... |
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