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blossoming
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 03:08:06 PM in AEST
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I think of all the games we might've played
If you hadn't been stolen
By an early grave
I feel guilt that you don't always enter my shaken up head
But I know it's you who's sending me the happy thoughts instead
My eyes long to observe my first beautiful sister
To relate round and round, back and forth
But I can't hear, see, smell or touch
'Cause I stayed south, you went North
Amy
I love you
and I know you'd have been
the most fascinating girl that I'd ever seen
Just like the tree who grew from you
She is dazzling, strong and a perfect view
And to me you are perfect
despite how you grew
and i hope you're aware of my feelings
however many
however few
...blossoming
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dolly_dagger
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2004-04-02 15:08:06]
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Re: blossoming
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 03:54:21 PM AEST
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awww! that is so sweet!! amy is a very lucky girl to have a sweet handsom young man like u love her ;-) Great write! it was sooo swEEt!!*
keep writin!!luved it so much!
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Re: blossoming
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by Necromant on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:13:45 PM AEST
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Ah what a bitter poem, I'm sure the messege arrived. Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: blossoming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:22:14 PM AEST
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A beautifully crafted write, very well done.
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Re: blossoming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 06:49:54 PM AEST
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| i would consider re-reading this poem if i were you blondie |
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Re: blossoming
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:53:20 PM AEST
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Dolly,
Amy is a very special girl your never forget her, she is always there somewhere in your thoughts. she would have been a fantastic person just like you and becky. keep writing this was very heart felt.
hugs and love
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Re: blossoming
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:54:03 AM AEST
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| i am never going to understand exactly how you feel, and this poem evokes so much sadness that i could never express so meaningfully or beatifully. you are already a wonderful sister, and friend and im sure amy would have found both those things in you babe. all i can do is *hugs* and congratulate you in being so fabulous. anytime you need me, im here. millie x |
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Re: blossoming
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by Coaster on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:47:19 PM AEST
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Loved the poem. Very deep! Keep posting them up and I look foward to reading more of your stuff!
Ryan |
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