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silent screams
Contributed by
spider
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:38:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I scream silently
From within.
But no one hears.
And no one sees,
My silent tears.
That fall
When I'm alone.
You make me pretend
That I am fine.
But you dont know.
You don't see the signs
That I'm falling apart.
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spider
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2004-04-02 16:38:13]
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Re: silent screams
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:46:16 PM AEST
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Hoping for brighter days
God bless,
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Re: silent screams
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 05:07:07 PM AEST
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this is exactly how i feel, i luved how u put it:) Good write.. keep writin!
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Re: silent screams
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by Queen_Dolly on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:47:52 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comment =)
This is a beautifully tragic poem, if it's an expression of what you're feeling, then I hope things get better for you.
The phrase "scream silently" is very inspirational and provokes alot of thought.
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