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flower am I
Contributed by
carpets
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:20:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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the big wise machine man god mooned my gorgeous gold green goddess girl
so we worship the guy & his daughter
sweet snow white
this angel likes no baby blue beauty
frantic red dreams of storming sun beam
gaze with my eye to see languid music
a dog child looking
oh brother give your hair if he smile and maybe grand oceaness love him for what friend face our sisterly cat woman
here her fuller mom run on not walk and she ask a son
is it pa
dad go by
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Re: flower am I
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by AllThatJazz on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:04:08 PM AEST
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| this poem is very profound, it reminds me of modernist writers because of the lack of puncuation and the symbolism. Good work, keep it up! |
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