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the demons whisper
Contributed by
PieEater
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 08:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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touche my lips and kiss my cheak
tell me those poetic words i love to hear
but can you deciple the venmous whispers?
do you feel the hot breath on your ear?
and now that you look around
are the walls closing in?
can you feel the finger nails on your neck,
digging into your skin?
can you feel thier hands around you?
are they yours or are they mine?
do you know what it is you've done?
can you distinguish the dirty crime?
listen to the laughing
as you stumble back and fall
searching for the bottle
disobeying the demons call
your making them angry
they want your freshly cut skin
dripping untouched blood
caoxed with deadly sin
can you feel the clock, it's ticking
the demons hear your heart
filled with lost desire,
love no longer part
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Re: the demons whisper
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:00:51 PM AEST
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searching for the bottle
disobeying the demons call
Loved those two lines as well as the rhetorical questions. Great poem... don't really get your nickname however :P
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