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Self-Injury
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:41:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hold my scarce beating heart
In the palm of my hand
Outraged by my own complacency
Every night I dine with fear
And court the very thoughts
That cause me the most pain
I hate my life
Just like I always have
So lost, this emotion eats away
I crave this form of self-injury
Head hurting, can't (won't) write about
This searing anguish
Please kill me
Please remind me why I'm here
Please tell me why this pain
Always stays inside, inside
This hate keeps me alive at night
When the taunting is the loudest
Can't believe this immense pain
That I've spawned for myself
Reliving past events
And blocking out the hear and now
Can someone please help me?
So lonely...
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2004-04-02 21:41:46]
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Re: Self-Injury
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by MyLastBreath on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:46:56 PM AEST
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So much emotion. Beautiful writing! Oh, how I can relate.
Stay Strong
Peace |
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Re: Self-Injury
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by Soulless on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:56:19 PM AEST
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And you thought I could write? Your words spill out so clean and silky, its music to my ears. I love it.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Self-Injury
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:07:36 PM AEST
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| Oh, bobo, this is such a sad write. I am so sorry you are going through this pain. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Self-Injury
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by thumper on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:03:38 AM AEST
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| You are becoming one of my favorite poets on this site. Your expression is so fluid and vivid! It is a shame that pain is the pilot of your vehicle! Write on, bobo, write on. ; 0 ) |
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Re: Self-Injury
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 03:35:04 PM AEST
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wow this is amazing.. so powerful, i love it..
keep fighting joel..
char xx |
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Re: Self-Injury
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:20:50 PM AEST
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| wow I can totally relate to this poem, its written so well and powerfully that you can totally get into it because it grips u. wow |
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Re: Self-Injury
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by persia on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:17:07 PM AEST
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hurt iz so real and so r ur wordz
i wish i could help u but i only av wordz and dey can b meaningless sometimez.
Keep writing and i'll keep reading
Persia |
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