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Slowly Losing My Life
Contributed by
MyLastBreath
on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:43:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Trying to justify
The reasoning of my mistakes
I can't find the answers
And I can't keep from
Spiraling down
Farther and farther
Harder and harder
I know what happens next
I've been here too many times before
I can't get a grip on anything
My mind is racing
While my heart is barely beating
Tears are swelling in my eyes
I've lost my vision
While I'm Slowly losing my life
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MyLastBreath
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2004-04-02 21:43:07]
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Re: Slowly Losing My Life
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:45:35 PM AEST
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very sad poem!!!! i hope ur life gets better. best wishes for u love :~) Good poem tho i enjoyed it, great imagery!
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Re: Slowly Losing My Life
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by SageofHalo123330 on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 09:15:02 PM AEST
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| i completely understand where you are coming from. justifying yourself is very hard to do sometimes. im goign through the same kind of thing right now. i know that you can pull through it if you believe in yourself. |
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