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LOVE SO FAKE
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:04:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A dream of love Could not be found Unless intwined with agony One day a year When hugs are shared But your only hugged by yourself He's gone He's left your curled up beaten down body Laying on the floor A heart covered by thorns Could not be reached And never will He never tried nothing But to walk out the door so silently On that special day With a rose that dropped out his hand Onto the doorstep
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Re: LOVE SO FAKE
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:53:13 PM AEST (User
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I can almost feel the heartache and frustration. What a beautiful use of a sort of imagery. Overall, well done. Bravo and encore.
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Liquidsusnhine aka: Chels |
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Re: LOVE SO FAKE
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:39:07 AM AEST (User
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i liked this although I didn't fully get it it was still really good.
Bobo (Joel) |
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