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gothic funeral
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the late fall by midnight,
dark angels arrives.
The doom share's it's beauty,
with the full moons pride.
The goddess of darkness,
opens the fallen portal.
The first vampire enters,
and hide beneath the trees.
I enter the dark throne,
in the midnight doom.
My speech is haunted,
by desolated souls.
I share my brief pain,
with the dead spirit.
I'm late tonight,
but so warmly welcomed.
As I step inside the garden,
the organ starts to play.
I can see the dead.
The black long hair
and the blood red dress.
She's the gothic queen.
I enter the dark throne,
in the midnight doom.
My speech is haunted,
by desolated souls.
I share my brief pain,
with the dead spirit.
The tumbledown rose,
lays on your chest.
All the beauty flows,
in you're pale face.
I admire the beauty.
that suffered your heart.
From the immortal prophet,
that thorne you apart.
I enter the dark throne,
in the midnight doom.
My speech is haunted,
by desolated souls.
I share my brief pain,
with the dead spirit.
Copyright ©
gothicangel
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2004-04-03 14:48:12]
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Re: gothic funeral
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 02:56:57 PM AEST
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I love the way this poem seems to unearth its emotion in me. It seems... ethereal, mystical, almost. Possibly like an out of body experience. It's very deep. Bravo and encore.
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liquidsunshine aka: Chels |
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Re: gothic funeral
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 03:04:55 PM AEST
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This poem is really neat. I feel like we share the same interest in peoms. I write dark poetry and sometimes even happy ones. keep up the good work I hope to see more.
-Victoria- |
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Re: gothic funeral
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by katyqueen35 on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:31:37 PM AEST
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I love this poem.
You did a great job.
Keep writing :O) |
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Re: gothic funeral
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:04:37 AM AEST
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This was beautiful in its own way. Very creepy and well written. I loved the image of the organ playing that was just brilliant in my opinion.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: gothic funeral
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:17:53 AM AEST
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| neatly written..very interesting read. venkat |
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Re: gothic funeral
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 02:06:56 AM AEST
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| such imagry, such beauity, you have captivated me once again in this world of yours. |
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