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We're not wrong
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:26:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You tell me Im still in my youth
Im way too young to know the truth
You think Ill never realize
That to the world Ive closed my eyes
But Im in love, I really am
You say we cant; its all a sham
I cherish him, We cherish us
And still youre making such a fuss
You didnt know that we accept
You havent seen how much weve wept
We know these days might come to end
And knowing this, we shall contend
Until it comes well just enjoy
Because you see, I love this boy
I understand I broke his heart
Over the time we spent apart
I know that we are still in school
That this is why you call me Fool
But Ive explained to him just this
As well, I know that we will miss
The times we shared if I must leave
That if I do hell briefly grieve
He promised me hed be okay
That he wouldnt die inside that day
Hell go with friends and have his fun
Then his new life hell have begun
He promised it wont hurt too much
And he wont need some stupid crutch
I told him how I cant forget
And disregard is not a threat
Cause if I ever let him go
Our love will still be one I know
If someone leaves, if someones gone
T wont be as if its all withdrawn
If we must end, our love will fade
But well stay friends, were not afraid
Weve seen both sides just for incase
Well never forget our hearts, the ace
For now, we love, thats all there is
His hand in mine, my hand in his
Youve never loved, or even held
Someone, but Im under loves spell
You cant tell me if were in love
We know what are hearts tell us of
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2004-04-03 16:26:33]
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Re: We're not wrong
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 05:45:21 PM AEST
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Sunshine, This is just lovely. I remember these feelings. I married a man I met when I was about your age, and I'm still beside him today. I see a very mature attitude and a very well written poem.
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Re: We're not wrong
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:09:03 PM AEST
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I'm glad you're sticking with your heart no matter what people may say...True love is hard to find and I must say that your love seems to be a true blessing...Follow your heart,in the end it's the only thing that matters.Beautiful write Sunshine :o)
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Re: We're not wrong
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:22:17 PM AEST
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I love this one! It's awesomely written. Kind of long, but that never hurt a good poem.
Take care, and keep shining.
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