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untitled
Contributed by
saha
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Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:39:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The one feeling
Emptiness that is filling all of me
I try to feed this hunger
Burning deep in my inside
But I fall again
And I can't reach the answer
I can't breathe
I'm drown in my broken ambitions
I am nothing more that
A reflections in raindrops
Falling from the sky
Telling a story that
No one wants to hear
I can't breathe
I'm drown in my broken ambitions
I'm so sick of speaking words that
No one understands
Hidden in darkness
I see the light
Seems so close
But unreachable.
Copyright ©
saha
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2004-04-03 16:39:08]
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:47:23 PM AEST
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Hello. This is well written. You defined hopelessness well. Welcome to YPDC. I think you will like it here.
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