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first and last love
Contributed by
shortchics_rock_07
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 05:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you are my first love
no doubt about it
i feel so strong for you
i wish i knew if you felt the same way to
i know you like me,but is it love?
i guess i'll just have to look to the stars above
hoping and praying that you do
trusting my heart,and believing that it's true
but i want to be your last love
that's what you said
i want that to
then we'll never be brought to an end
growing old with you
and having a life together would be the best
so what are you waiting for?
lets take that test!
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Re: first and last love
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:50:34 PM AEST
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I liked the "lets take that test" ending made me smile :D Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: first and last love
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:35:59 PM AEST
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| You Have To Believe In Love To Have It |
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