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if I die
Contributed by
princesspurty
on
Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 09:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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if I die would you want to be told? if I die, would your heart grow cold? would it grow cold like mine has that killed me so? if I die, would it bother you so? would you feel guilty and confess to the sin? would you wish to turn back time, put my heart on mend? or would you look the other way as the last tear flows? if I die, would you place a faded worn flower before the lid is to be closed? what would you do when the next email you got said i no longer am alive, even though I am, but without your love I'm dead? If i die, would that be the final ending you longed for, the one i thought you would dread? If I die, in a scence that without you I've been dead for so long would you care and feel like your all alone? if I die..... would your heart die?
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Re: if I die
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mystery_Girl on
Monday, 23rd September 2002 @ 05:00:37 PM AEST (User
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yeah this is very good and kinda reminds me of that song if tomorrow never comes.....i like the last bit if i die....would your heart die....to mean that much to someone!!!!...nice but sad write...take care...tanya.....:-) |
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Re: if I die
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 08:58:08 AM AEST (User
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Yes, very sad, but good write |
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