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The Game of Disappointment and Pain
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:00:43 PM in AEST
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Blackened, faced with solid fears
Beaten, covered in dry, salty tears
Let there be freedom from self-doubt
With every added disappointment- my heart starts to shout.
Fist full of nothing, surrounded by mud
Tears on my face dissolve into blood
Challenge yourself to achieve more then this
Save every breath for that long awaited last kiss.
Misplaced emotions on a hard bed of need
Someone somewhere on knees that bleed
Complain of honor wasted on shame
Standing is hard with no one I can blame.
Crave attention, get it in any way
Pray the nightmares disappear today
Fingers shaking, head is spinning
Never let them know who is winning.
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strange_lindsey
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:56:21 PM AEST
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This, Lindsey, is one seriously fantastic, amazing, excellent, exquisite, impressive, (gotta check my thesaurus, but you get the idea) poem. In just a few deft words you capture so much . . . damn, but you're good.
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:15:24 AM AEST
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wow very good.
I don't even know where to begin...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:03:45 AM AEST
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| You certainly are searching within to find your answers ... your poetry speaks volumes and I pray that you find the happiness you seek ... you deserve every bit of joy that comes your way ... an awesome write Lindsey ... hugs Jan |
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:43:41 AM AEST
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It's amazing (in a very dark way) how so much can be said about the concept of emptiness, how perfectly imperfection can be portrayed. I have to marvel at your ability as a writer.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:48:41 AM AEST
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may all your dreams be like your poetry.......always fantastic.
thank you |
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by silent on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:57:44 AM AEST
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very deep and darkly expressed, you wrote that perfectly my friend. I love it
Silent |
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:00:37 PM AEST
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Someone posted this beautiful poem and claimed for it to be her own at:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6883566/
Just thought you should know. |
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:13:17 PM AEST
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Thank you for bringing that to my attention about the other post... I really appriciate it
Lindsey |
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Re: The Game of Disappointment and Pain
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:22:08 PM AEST
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Hey, wow, this is good. I can certainly understand why someone might choose to steal this particular poem (not that it's right).
This poem rocks Lindsey and I'm glad that you got everything straightened out!!
*J* |
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