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Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:02:32 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Six figure Suicide,
Dead ringer for an alibi,
Stuff your cheeks to crack a smile-
Stupid tactics with messed up style.
Sing the sorrow until it passes,
Drink it away in little shot glasses,
Belly up and washed ashore-
You bleed the pain away then ask for more.
Fugitive in a murder case,
Obsession shown in a beaten face,
Solid bricks still crumble under a fist-
When anger boils so deep, it begins to mock and insist.
You bawl in pain and fight back the tears,
No use in facing all your fears,
The depression begins to eat away at you-
So you adjust and make due.
Gutter minded and single handed,
You fight the war in broken bandages,
The lack of motivation and the absence of commitment,
Make you wonder where every blow hit.
Scratch every itch, pick every scab,
The answer doesnt come from some hidden prescription lab,
Drug yourself up so you can rest in peace
And forget for a minute your ever-haunting beast.
Copyright ©
strange_lindsey
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2004-04-03 18:02:32]
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Re: Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:34:49 PM AEST
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| Man i can feel the steam off that one. The only question is where is the anger directed. This was a well written poem. If you ever try wrighting another like it and you should then give the anger somthing to make it take a form. |
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Re: Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:43:10 PM AEST
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Interesting, angry, emotive, powerful . . . I like it. I like it a lot, come to think of it. *trots off to read more of your poetry*
--Nora |
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Re: Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 09:00:03 PM AEST
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Angry, And Powerful ....But Yet A Good Write...
I Like It....Thank's For Sharing This Poem.....
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:53:55 AM AEST
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brilliant focus, yes for a night without a nightmare.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:15:34 PM AEST
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The anger radiates from this one! And you say you aren't a great poet!!!! You must be kidding!! You're poetry is very expressive and pwerful! I really love your work! Never think you're not great! You're a marvelious poet!! (excuse my spelling heehe)
Anne :D:D |
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Re: Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 03:06:05 PM AEST
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Powerful write...."And forget for a minute your ever-haunting beast."
I loved that line in particular.
The emotion seeths from this.
Very well done
Roses
Larry
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Re: Shoelaces and Scotch Tape
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:08:26 PM AEST
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whoa this has a hell of a lot of anger and power in it.. i love it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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