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The Day We Made Love
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:27:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Day We Made Love
The day we made love
Eden came to an end
From that moment forward
My whole life would depend
Upon the way you saw me
The way you made me feel
At last happiness had found me
And love was truly real
I had tasted your nectar
Its forbidden fruits and its joy
My heart could never go back
They are mine to enjoy
So here I am watching
While my hearts passions burn
Just outside Edens gate
Waiting for your return
Russ
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Re: The Day We Made Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 10:38:14 PM AEST
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Absolutely lovely, Russ...
Jenni |
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Re: The Day We Made Love
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 03:56:04 AM AEST
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| Wow, such a romantic pen you have, I loved this ... Jan |
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Re: The Day We Made Love
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:12:59 PM AEST
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Another great awesome poem!! Written with passion! Oh I loved it!!!!!!! Wonderful!!!! Brilliant!! LOooouuuvvveeeedddd it lol!!!!
Anne :D:D:D |
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Re: The Day We Made Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:16:56 PM AEST
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Very pasonate write.
Pity u only had one day.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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