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Weakend Soul
Contributed by
SweetNess8003
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Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:30:46 PM in AEST
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Where have my sunny days gone?
No more smiles,
Always something going wrong.
All there is, is rain
Showing my sadness,
And spelling out my pain.
Wondering everyday,
Will this ever end?
Or is it another day to pay?
Your quickness to judge
Is crushing me
While I try not to hold a grudge.
Weaker grows my soul
Filled with darkness,
No longer seeing it's warm glow.
My strength is fleeing from me,
Not wanting it to go.
Becoming someone I don't want to be.
Why do you push me away,
When I'm trying to make you proud?
Stuck now with an unwelcome stay.
I feel my heart dying
With each false smile.
Can you see my soul crying?
My fear has come true,
Your lack of faith in me
Causes my disappointment in you.
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SweetNess8003
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2004-04-03 19:30:46]
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Re: Weakend Soul
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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All there is, is rain
Great line right there =) A nice write.
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Weakend Soul
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by AliB on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:23:20 AM AEST
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Not sure who this is directed at but I can soooo relate. Just hold your head up high, sometimes us single mums are a lot stronger than the married ones. I get down sometimes but because I'm lonely not coz I'm a single mum, thats all I've ever known, if you wanna chat feel free to pm me.
Ali xx |
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Re: Weakend Soul
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:38:44 PM AEST
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What a sad bitter poem! Very well written made me remember things I expieranced myself. Hey you know what I learnt? That if you try to ignore them the hurt lessens, never give up! Great write
Anne :D |
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