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NO FAILURE
Contributed by
justinblue
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:45:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Work all of the day
At night I reside in jail
On the ice cold metal bunk I will lay
For my crime I pay but in life I cant fail
Fore my God walks by my side
For his way I abide
Because he giveth his only son bound to the cross by nail
Anyone whose mind wanders, I will tell
God is the only way
He'll turn your night to day
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2004-04-03 20:45:46]
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Re: NO FAILURE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zexen on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:05:54 PM AEST
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| Good poem, I'm not a christan or anything but i can see what you are trying to convey. Keep up the wrighting, maybe re-do thid poem with another paragraph. |
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