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Midlife Crisis
Contributed by
ConfusedPancake
on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 10:35:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i watched you fall between the cracks
another mishap
a miscommunication of ghosts
loss of hope
the love we share
in a place where cigarettes go
their glow
their loss of hope to show
trickles in the love we share
to feel the warmth of this bottle
it all starts again
i learned to break with ease
all in the end
no tomorrow for feeling
no separation of self
in the mean time you're leaving
a midlife crisis of death
i watched you fall between the cracks
after you stop and laugh
a miscommunication of letters
loss of something better
the love we share
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2004-04-03 22:35:34]
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Re: Midlife Crisis
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by StarSpark on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 11:16:06 PM AEST
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Good write, it created a strong image for me
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