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Metaphysical quantities of an undetermined mass
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:19:16 AM in AEST
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I am a lamp post
I am a tree
I share my carbon atoms
And I share them with thee
And I come from the sea
And I come from the sea
And I come from the sea
I just dont know what
I just dont know what
I wanna be
Wanna be
I am the sun
I am the air
A Falling pear
A Falling pear
A Falling pear
I am what I believe
I am what I believe
I know I'm a knife
I know I'm a knife
Reality is in the skull
Insanity is in the sky
Information is getting me high
Quantum mechanics makes me a pie
It makes me a pie
And I come from the sea
And I come from the sea
And I come from the sea
I am what I be
And I am what I be
And I am what I be
I'm both alive and I'm dead
I'm bloodstains on a bed
Deep, dark and unholy red
I am so dead
I am so dead
Because I am dead
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Re: Metaphysical quantities of an undetermined mass
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by poison_touch666 on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:21:28 AM AEST
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| very...interesting, strange poem, i like it. |
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Re: Metaphysical quantities of an undetermined mass
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:36:33 AM AEST
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I thought you'd quit. Obviously not. Good to hear it. This poem has nice use of repetition and is the first i've seen that plays with the particle/wave duality and such like.
Interesting poem. |
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Re: Metaphysical quantities of an undetermined mass
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:41:58 AM AEST
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| thnx, I quit for a while, and then I found innerpeace after a short stay in a hospital. Anyway I realized, ***** comments, I forgot that hundreds of people were reading my poems, and I relaized thats all that counts. Anyway YPDC is like a ***** addiction, I just cant leave it! |
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Re: Metaphysical quantities of an undetermined mass
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by Dove on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 07:40:41 AM AEST
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Very intresting indeed!!
love
dove |
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Re: Metaphysical quantities of an undetermined mass
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:04:44 AM AEST
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| Hmmm, strange but unique, I enjoyed reading it. I'm sure I'll understand this...some day... |
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