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Hope and Harmony
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:35:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Caliginous shroud hides blue sky shining
'Neath onyx endowed lies silver lining
Through trials morose, love never elopes
Still to grow, so close, inspirited hopes
The deepest of layers to curtain desire
Through strongest of prayers, pierce and inspire
Boundless devotion, mind, body and soul
Depthless emotion 'pon hearts to inscroll
By faith united, blissful concurrence
Calmness ignited, wishful assurance
Guided from above, a bond transcendent
Perfection hereof, flawless attunement
Two concepts so true, adjoined with beauty
Now reborn anew, hope and harmony
Despondent no more, beacon emerges
Resplendent ardour, love songs from dirges
Forever to shine, forever complete
Felicitous line i'll always repeat...
"Kindred spirits, mates of soul
Wandering halves, now made whole"
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:18:34 AM AEST
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Wow...... I'm impressed yet again =)
still cooking up a collaboration idea (not having too much luck)
but in the meantime.......
This is an awesome peice of work...... really
~Ellen |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:30:48 AM AEST
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The first stanza intrigued me, the second impressed me, the third struck me, whilst the rest delighted me . . .
"Forever to shine, forever complete
Felicitous line i'll always repeat..."
That brought a smile to my face. |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:59:02 AM AEST
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| As always, a beautiful and overwhelming write. I swear I've learnt more new words from reading your poems than I have in years of school :) |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:22:58 AM AEST
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| I am so thrilled to see you have submitted a new poem. It is always a joy to read your poetry. The poem was perfect and you have the golden touch. Thank you for sharing this with us. I look forward to your next submission. Kie |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:21:46 PM AEST
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With some poets, you know before you even begin to read that it's going to be a work of art. You're one of them my friend.
Very well done as always
Larry |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 01:04:29 PM AEST
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Thanks for your poem inspired me and I would like to rea more form you.
Continue iwth this great work you're doing.
Your truelly
Mabasa V.L
South Africa. |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:05:11 PM AEST
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very intriguing write dan, i wonder what brought about these beautiful words. you are a true poet through and through and you never cease to amaze any of us here with how much you improve with every piece.
Lindsey |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 06:19:23 AM AEST
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| Oh, your sweetheart is such a lucky woman indeed to have such beautiful poetry written for her ... no matter that you can't express yourself through spoken words - this poem would delight her one hundred fold ... looking forward to your next delight ... Jan |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:58:57 PM AEST
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| wow... nothing more.. just wow.. ill show how much that poem as hit me by... i vow from this moment never to write another piece of poetry as long as i live, until the day i reach the calibur of what i just read, so everyone have fun reading my writes, because i will never be writing ever again, dan.. amazing so truely amazing wods cant express how much.. on that note, i lay down my pen and leave the writing realm |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by blueheart on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:07:37 PM AEST
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| Brilliant piece and as usual I have my trusty dictionary by my side. I loved the last two lines especially. |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:38:42 PM AEST
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Just realized I'd neglected to comment on this one . . .
. . . so came over to it, reread it, and remembered why it was that I hadn't commented before: I was out of my mind with jealousy :-P.
This, Dan, is la creme de la creme. Niiiiiiiiiiiiice.
--Nora |
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Re: Hope and Harmony
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:56:39 AM AEST
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Magnificent piece of work here....I am impressed!! I never realised what I was missing....
Jenni |
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