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Plastic Thesis
Contributed by
ConfusedPancake
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 02:25:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A blank theory in your mind
of a revolutionary time
Where the steel wasn't so cold
It didn't fit the mold
And neither did you
A growth in thinking
still we're dreaming
Where the bed became rain
It didn't melt the pain
And neither did you
A weekend lecture
on a boneless bone fracture
At the tip of your head
A point of lead that never loved me
And neither did you
The timing's off
what a tragic loss
A concept of a possibility
that holds no reality
And neither do you
Copyright ©
ConfusedPancake
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2004-04-04 14:25:47]
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Re: Plastic Thesis
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 02:28:54 PM AEST
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This captures that weird confusion perfectly.
Really gets the idea said in a confusing way, which gets me confused, and then you feel the cofusion, and.....
hmmm..... I should take a minute to collect my thoughts after that =)
At any rate this is a great write. I really enjoyed it.
Well done =)
God bless,
Ellen |
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