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Take My Tears
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I havent seen you in ages
My bodies aching and i know i'm wrong
I am dead to you
But only because i killed myself
In hope for a look
A look that would make me smile
But only brought me pain
And begging for more
I'm still waiting
For that glance
I will fill the bottle of my tears
Please take them
For i am not worthy of crystilized water
For being so pathetic
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bleeding_chains
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2004-04-04 16:27:42]
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Re: Take My Tears
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:30:24 PM AEST
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Ah what a bitter poem! It reeks pain, very well expressed! Awesome write! Hope you find some happiness
Anne :D |
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