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loves fool
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:58:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Im a fool..
drowning in your eyes,
trying to collect the pieces of my heart,
but watching them fly away,
trying to draw along the same line twice,
trying to find myself but trying to hide,
so confused about how i feel,
what i want,
please tell me how its meant to be
loves fool...
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2004-04-04 16:58:18]
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Re: loves fool
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:02:58 PM AEST
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Ah lol the authors note was great "im not sure it makes sense..but love doesnt..so that ok" Oh obviously even the poem! It does make sense! Loves fool indeed very well written poem! Loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: loves fool
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:36:58 AM AEST
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| I agree with Necromant, that was a really cool author's note...love makes a fool of us all but still we bow to its command...beautiful write here, sad and longing. |
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Re: loves fool
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:58:57 AM AEST
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Lost,
It makes perfect sense to one who has been there. I love the line about trying to draw along the same line twice. I knew EXACTLY what that meant. You have conveyed this so very well.
Stitch |
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Re: loves fool
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:43:46 PM AEST
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Ahhh yes! I have been love's fool on more than one occasion...These two lines define the poem for me:
"Trying to draw along the same line twice,
trying to find myself but trying to hide"
Very honest words...well written piece Philly!
Scorp. |
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