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Twisted teddy bear
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In a shut-down toystore,
On a dusty shelf,
There sits teddy bear,
On the top by itself.
The lights are all off,
No shoppers come there,
And none knows about,
The lonely teddy bear.
Still no one comes,
Over the years,
And the lil teddy bear,
Sheads its tears.
Its cold and alone,
Feeling angry and sad,
As its heart twists,
Its mind growing mad.
Youd better watch out,
And take care to beware,
For the deserted store,
And twisted teddy bear.
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quilted_rag_doll
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2004-04-04 17:08:45]
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Re: Twisted teddy bear
(User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:24:28 PM AEST
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i rather like this one. just another one dat i thought up...
sometimes i don know where i get ideas?! hmm...
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Re: Twisted teddy bear
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 05:41:51 PM AEST
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| I think I'm in love with your poem, lol. It was very cleverly written. (I think that's a word... *shrugs*) I really like the metphor. It flowed very well. Great job! |
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