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Preserving Our Love
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Preserving Our Love
What is this pain?
That burns deep inside
Could it be the remnants?
Of the love that I hide
Why is there a smile?
Amidst the pain I feel
Because the love we shared
I still know is real?
What is this tear?
Bringing joy to my face
Could it be it remembers?
Another time, another place?
Even tho youre gone
I know our love was meant to be
And even amidst loneliness and pain
That truth will always be
Even now your love
Refuses to abandon my soul
Changing tears beginning as pain
Into the sweetest memories of love I know
This heart will adamantly refuse
To allow our love to become
A monument to misery
As happens to some
On this hope my heart will stand
Will never acquiesce to the pain
Believing the flower of our love
Will blossom again after the rain
Believing someday, somehow
When all other work is done
Two hearts that love preserved
Can again be as one
Russ
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Lone_er
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Re: Preserving Our Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:59:29 PM AEST
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Awww Russ....This is sad but so beautiful... and so hopeful....
Hugs
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Re: Preserving Our Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:21:48 PM AEST
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This kind of love I know. Nothing or no one can ever replace that one certain person in your heart. I know this pain and I know this joy. I also know this is a lovely piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: Preserving Our Love
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:54:21 PM AEST
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I luved it! It was riLLy sad... but bootiful! :)
KeEp i.t. ^ppers!!
*XoXoXo* |
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Re: Preserving Our Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 02:37:54 PM AEST
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| I know this kind of love! I hope there will be a time to relive thi9s feeling! Just loved this peice! Christina |
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Re: Preserving Our Love
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:18:28 PM AEST
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A Very Sad Heartfelt Write......So Beautifully Writen Though....Keep Em Coming :-)
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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