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CROWDED HALL
Contributed by
justinblue
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The only love I've ever had that didn't cause pain and torment
Was the love of my family and the love god sent
I hate love, yet like a rock, in it's abyss I always fall
I fall, but it feels as if I'm a bird flying oh so high in the sky
Ready to take a walk down the long straight hall
When all of a sudden tons of people crowd the corridor so I can't get by
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justinblue
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2004-04-04 21:37:23]
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Re: CROWDED HALL
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:37:57 PM AEST
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I believe that this poem is not finished and can be better but i still liked it anyways. I've been where you are...i still kinda am. Love:::Kirby
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