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One Last Cigarette...
Contributed by
vampiricsuccubus
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:50:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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One last cigarette
I step into the footlights
The tears stream down my face
I loved you!
You left me here cold and stunned
To pick up the pieces
Of my shattered heart.
Dont you care?
I loved you
And you ripped out my heart.
Imbecile!
Whyd you have to go and do that?
You nearly distroyed me.
You knew I couldnt take this
And yet you did it anyway
Could you be more stupid?
My heart is broken
Ripped out
Shredded
Reduced to nothing but sharp shards
Are you going to pick them up?
Or are you going to leave this mess
For someone else to pick up
I no longer care what you do
Move on with youre life
Leave me here to rot
I HATE YOU
Why did you have to go and do that?!?!?
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Re: One Last Cigarette...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:42:35 AM AEST
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Ugh, guys are such pigs. Way to vent! Awesome poem, I feel your anger and hurt.
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Re: One Last Cigarette...
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:39:24 AM AEST
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great write. Even if i'm a guy it is good. Not all guys r pigs, most r but not all.
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