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Angered Revenge
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:01:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Sweet saddistic savage solice
Intent righteous feverish malice
Quiet suple supporting handling
Easy movement torturous fondling.
Quick grip sly fingers rough
Each word you add sounds too tough
Violent tremors heightened anger
Content and upset with the danger.
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strange_lindsey
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2004-04-04 22:01:52]
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Re: Angered Revenge
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 11:18:42 PM AEST
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Poetry is a great way to vent. I think you did a great job expressing it in this poem. Anger and revenge are the after effects of hurt. Because we hurt and it churns inside of us, it brings with it an ivy that grows into anger, revenge, fury as we torture ourselves. I know this feeling well.
I liked your poem alot and I am glad you found YPDC you have blessed us with your talent... Kie |
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Re: Angered Revenge
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:11:48 AM AEST
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Such a great expression of anger! Beautifully written. I love it.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Angered Revenge
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:19:34 AM AEST
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*steps back to avoid fury* You sound like you're ready to breathe fire! Concise, sharp, and memorable...I can 'feel' the anger here.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: Angered Revenge
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by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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Well whatever seems to be ***** you off,
seems to be inspiring wonderful writing.
Not that I want you to be angry, but I can feel the intensity of your emotions,
wow... |
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