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LISTEN TO MY CRY
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:18:57 PM in AEST
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I'm knocking on your door-
Won't anyone hear my cry?
Am I nothing more than a haunting shadow to you- filling your memory with the terrified youth you once were?
Help me-
Won't anyone listen to my cry?
You're too transparent- wanting the world to revolve anly around your own disgusting selves.
Encourage me-
Please listen to my cry.
Am I nothing more than a pleading voice-
Unrecognized and forgotten?
Understand me-
Just listen to my cry!
Am I just an interruption to your memorized discussions?
Once more I am knocking on your door-
WON'T ANYONE HEAR MY CRY?
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PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-04-04 22:18:57]
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Re: LISTEN TO MY CRY
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by geoffreyalanbest on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:28:57 PM AEST
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Your poem is excellant. I hear your cry as I also cry in this wide world. Humanity grows farther apart. We all grow alone but I am out there and so are you and many many more like us. You are a poet and in such your cries ahll be heard by countless number across countless years.
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Re: LISTEN TO MY CRY
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 12:33:15 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A CRY FOR HELP! ANYONE
WITH A HEART SHOULD HEAR THAT CRY-WE'LL SEE!! NICELY WRITTEN!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: LISTEN TO MY CRY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:36:35 AM AEST
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i can feel your frustration! a great plea.
wildejohnny.
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