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Alcoholic Illusions
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:45:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My head is spinning,
All the colors blur together.
I feel unstable,
My feet,
Unable to maintain my balance.
My eyes roll slowly back,
Deep inside my head,
Causing the colors to fade into blackness.
Suddenly
As if caused by an outside force.
My eyes shoot open,
The world stops spinning,
The colors,
Go back to their original forms.
My feet gain their balance.
Standing in front of me,
Is the girl that I know.
I know her,
Not only as she stands in front of me.
But I know this girl,
For she is the one from my dreams
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2004-04-05 01:45:01]
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Re: Alcoholic Illusions
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:29:36 AM AEST
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| the begining bit is really good! the end is beautiful. |
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