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What i am
Contributed by
doriens_picture
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:17:27 AM in AEST
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Lately I am lost
I am
A writer without words
A person who hates everything about themselves
But I work so hard to change that
To better my self at any cost
Still alone but that will not change
I write but I am never satisfied with anything I write
And I never really like any of it at all
But I still exist and I still write
Because it is what I am and who I am
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Re: What i am
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by TearS on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:57:04 AM AEST
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| This is a terrific write, simple and honest...You should be proud of yourself because of your braveness...So many writers feel this but can't say...I liked it...It has a nice flow...Never stop... |
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Re: What i am
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by Stitch on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:06:49 AM AEST
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I know this feeling. It's so hard not to try when you get to this point, but usually letting go a little will make all the difference. Like special memories, the words come when they will and not when they don't. Sometimes we all need a rest. You have described the feelings well. The last line is my favorite.
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Re: What i am
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:56:23 AM AEST
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| Excellent description of a writer's nature. This poem is touching and simply states the truth, and I give you props for that. Also I love your nickname :) |
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Re: What i am
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by remote on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:37:48 PM AEST
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| Liked the honesty and simplicity of this work. I get the same feeling too, never satisfied, but I love it anyway. |
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Re: What i am
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by WAE on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:49:47 PM AEST
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I see the writer behind these lines and this is what only matters...
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