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cry or the bones
Contributed by
valek
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:43:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the weeping willow is crying for the bones
hating the way the sacred scream in their deadly tones
hanging over the hurt and the unlawfully punished
the ones filled with love and covered in rubbish
the iron fist is instigating yet once again
ruling with almighty power
making all life life seem sour
taking care of all the demon's sin
the blades are sharp, ready and willing
the angel plays its harp, steady for killing
if nothing, its to get rid of all the pain
to stop the hate and cease the rain
for if you will listen, right will explain
why we are the way, and christ complains
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Re: cry or the bones
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:46:48 AM AEST
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This is a very angsty depressing poem, its bith scary yet beautiful in the way you use your descriptions and anologies to near prefection
Well done ol chap!
Mzzl, Peace n' Respect |
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Re: cry or the bones
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by corrupted_minds on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:29:23 AM AEST
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nice poem
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