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not my turn yet
Contributed by
valek
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:58:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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this is the life
the life of a man left alone
with no one left to turn to
with no real, true home
the sea of despair is deepening
the sky of hate parts open
the wind of love blows away
the earth of hope erodes
leave me alone
im sure i'll be fine
dont kill me just yet
leave that up to me
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valek
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2004-04-05 10:58:21]
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Re: not my turn yet
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:05:25 AM AEST
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| creepy atsmophere, and nice descriptive wording. Its kinda breath taking in a way, I guess when you delve into people's heads in poetry its always a bit breath taking... |
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