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Once Again
Contributed by
Soulpoetry
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 01:52:34 PM in AEST
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oops
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Once again will love go throught,
and drive ourselves through the rough drought.
Once again will love find ways,
to be with you on the roughest days.
Once again will love not confuse,
or have no meaning the words being used.
Once again will love triumph,
or have no gain over our main trial.
Once again will love live tomorrow...
or leave again feeling endless sorrow.
By:
Peter www.soulpoetry.cjb.net
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Soulpoetry
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2004-04-05 13:52:34]
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Re: Once Again
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by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 02:13:05 PM AEST
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Hmmm...
I love the way you use the phrase:
"Once again will love..."
Just the repetition intertwines with the title,
and how love seems to be so forgiving,
yet it can be so confining...
As for opurtunities,
I believe that one should get as many,
(or more along the lines, one will)
opputunites as is required for him to do,
what he sets his mind to do |
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Re: Once Again
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:35:53 PM AEST
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| excellent write. simple and to the point. fantastic and powerful ending. |
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