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Waterfall Of Tears
Contributed by
night_child
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:35:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Wash away the blackness
Streaming down your skin
Wash away the make up
As it runs straight down your face
You've been crying again
Haven't you?
The tears that fall
So silent
Never do you speak
Telling of these feelings
That rip you up inside
I know you're screaming
You want someone to be there
I see the pain
You try to hide
Your emotions never escape me
Poorly hidden to my eyes
For I am feeling the same
I too have cried alone
Dry your face
I will help you
I know that others try
But they don't know how you feel
Not like I do
You still love him
Despite how much he hurts you
I have loved him too
Deep inside I hurt
Just as much as you
Come and walk with me
I will be your friend
To be there
I can take the pain
And make you feel some joy again
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2004-04-05 19:35:54]
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Re: Waterfall Of Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:57:49 AM AEST
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Wow beautiful inspirational poem! Shows a lot of care and love! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Waterfall Of Tears
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by whisper-of-night on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 06:46:15 PM AEST
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| My my my! I am really surprised.......pleasant surprised to read such a poem from you!!! I don't think this should belong to the dark poetrys section at all! A real caring and mature poem you just wrote, I am glad to see you break free of your own cage and start care about the others as well! Very good, you are grown!^_^ |
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