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goodbye karma mommy loves you
Contributed by
jmt25607
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:49:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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God took you away.
It doesn't seem fair,
but in the back of my mind,
you will always be there.
i never did see u , but still u were a part of me
i wish are paths would have crossed,
and your absence in this world,
is to me a great loss.
You were too young to die not even one, and
too innocent to feel that pain.
Only heaven benefits,
because you it has now gained.
I may think of you more or less
with each passing day,
but your strength is something I won't forget,
you have changed me in a way.
I wish for you eternal peace;
that's what you deserve karma.
I hope I live my life well enough
to meet up with you in the end.
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jmt25607
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2004-04-05 19:49:40]
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Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:19:13 PM AEST
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This is heart breaking....if it's what I think it is about...
I can identify with it..
Jenni |
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Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:47:11 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking is right......deeply moving.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you
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by Drake on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:13:28 PM AEST
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| Very touching...good write as well |
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Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:06:26 AM AEST
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| OMG this really touched me,so very sad! Christina |
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Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:29:47 PM AEST
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I don't normally comment with one of my own works, but I just wanted you to know, I share in your grief.You are not alone.
Titled: The Angels Called.....
The angels came from mounted high,
Cradled his soul I don't know why.
Wrapped in fleece-like softened wings.
Silenced now he no longer sings.
Nestled within a tidal womb.
Fertile bed becomes a tomb.
Shrouded in the serene abode.
A vacant place his body stowed.
Earthbound duty not his call,
A rain of stars on him did fall.
Whisked away before I could hold.
A lifeless body lay there cold.
Summoned to be an angel himself.
Journey of breath put on a shelf.
Though I miss his earthly duty.
I savor now his angelic beauty.
God bless...... |
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