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Lucid, departed and deceased
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:41:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Detached pain
Come acquire me
I am open and willing
Oh God how I am thus willing
Nothing gone but death
I sought for your hand
Your white hands
Embracing my choking words
Blood spewing
Eyelids sewn with lament
Lips trapped and ruptured
Breath deep and dark
Your deep black eyes see
Lucid, departed and deceased
Simple but thought through
Triumph in my own hell
Split in to gashes of torment
Dust upon my brows
You wipe them clean with your tears
Tears of agony
No longer will I torment
Willing to die
Die a painful death
Falling to our knees
Blood seething from my wounds
Wounds you have inflicted
I stroke your blood soaked hair
What a mat I have made
You are all I have lived for
Now I must die
Must die a terrible agonizing death
Copyright ©
williamdye
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2004-04-05 20:41:46]
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Re: Lucid, departed and deceased
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:11:27 PM AEST
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| I liked this one alot, descriptive, creative, and dark(as I like them) Keep them coming, I'll read more. |
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Re: Lucid, departed and deceased
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:22:55 AM AEST
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| Your poems are so real to me. You really have a way of expressing yourself in a way that others can relate to. Muhatma Ubid |
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Re: Lucid, departed and deceased
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:52:38 PM AEST
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wow I think this was better than your 'Drowning' poem although i am not sure. I think their both great. I loved so many lines in this an amazing poem brimming with talent and perfection.
Bobo (Joel) |
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