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perfectly deranged
Contributed by
valek
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:49:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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im flying under the dirt now
im seeing this so clearly somehow
you think you havent, but you have changed
inside our minds we are all a little deranged
now im sick and my throat is bleeding
my eyes are dripping and my head is screaming
cant find a way out of this vague perception
cant help but think the elders are full of deception
ive lost my way and i cant get out
all because of the old and all of their doubt
now im slammed onto the ground
and i cant see anything around
no longer does my blood flow through
and its all because of the untrue
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2004-04-05 21:49:11]
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Re: perfectly deranged
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by ConfusedPancake on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:09:48 PM AEST
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| i really honestly enjoyed reading this. it just rang out to me for some reason. i'm glad you wrote it. i'm glad i read it. please keep on. |
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