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With This Ring
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:42:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Smiling at the nearness of his being
Thinking this is how it will always be
From morning to night,for the rest of their lives
A heart of promises for an eternity
From the depths of her born again soul
An echo of loving whispers come forth
Looking into his eyes,she delivers these words
"My love,I will always be yours"
"With this ring,I offer my all to you
Let no worry or grief be yours alone
Mingling spirits,we will be as one
I will be that place you can call home"
Placing the ring on his gentle hand
Her heart dances,excited and sure
That this man who is standing before her
Is the meaning of love forever more
No longer the words can be found
For whatever is left,need never be spoken
True as her breath,in life and in death
This circle of love,will never be broken
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
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2004-04-05 23:42:10]
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Re: With This Ring
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by jmt25607 on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:47:23 PM AEST
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| your poem was greatly wrote and i hope you and this guy stay together 4 ever like it sounds like you will ---jessika |
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Re: With This Ring
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:01:26 AM AEST
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| Beautifully romantic,my best to you! Christina |
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Re: With This Ring
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:13:24 AM AEST
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Always you have written with such heart and beauty.....I wish you both happiness and laughter for the rest of your lives.
Larry |
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Re: With This Ring
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:30:12 AM AEST
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Oh Lovingwhispers I didn't know
I wish you both many many years of happiness with days of glow.
May you be blessed from the top of your head to your toe.
And may your circle of love never be broken!
lovely poem........beautiful wish!
congratulations!
love
consue |
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Re: With This Ring
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:37:47 PM AEST
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this is beautiful beyond words.
so filled with emotion and depth. im not into love poetry and i just LOVED this. impressive talent. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: With This Ring
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:16:45 AM AEST
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Now this is closer to the work I'm used to from you Sharon. Not quite as long as I'm used to from you.
:D You always said you'd share your chocolate with me anyways. :P
Cobalt/Jeff |
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