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Destroy the Wake of Death
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:10:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Empty inside
This space
Feeling the cavity
Echoing are words
Of loved ones
A cave
Of lovely echoes
But yet
A cave
Hollow
Cold
Sickening in the pit
Of heart and stomach
Comfort found
But in lonely slumber
The nothing
Blackness
Seeking to destroy
Brings ease
To the worse
Of waking dead
Copyright ©
desireemiote
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2004-04-06 09:10:50]
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Re: Destroy the Wake of Death
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:49:29 AM AEST
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I love the simplicity of this. Sometimes using a single word means so much more than using a whole bunch. The cave in the pit of the stomach. Oh, I know that feeling too well.
Nice write.
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Re: Destroy the Wake of Death
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:51:54 AM AEST
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Well said!!! Good write.
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Re: Destroy the Wake of Death
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by Zexen on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:43:08 AM AEST
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Brilliant just plain brilliant in all its simplicity,
you convey the emotions so well. |
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