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On the Road
Contributed by
Hurretje
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:55:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Heading…
Forward…
Towards…
Sunset
Avoiding traffic jams
Bags packed
Farewell said
Checked the gastap
Put todays newspaper
in the old-paper box
My key given to my neighbor,
So that she can
…water my plants…
…empty my mailbox…
…feed my cat…
…examine my world…
Locked the door
Headlights on
The skies
Golden delicious
Flamingos
Hunted down by fallen angels
Clad in black
Memories of a forgotten realm lighten their faces
Red yellow package
-odour of cotton, dry green-
Crumpled up
At my feet
Quiet noise from my radio
…your face…
…ethereal waves crash upon a golden shore…
…a long lost home nearly found…
Missed the red spot
A bull fooled by a toreador
Right foot down
Poor red yellow
Crushed further
My view on heaven torn
Long shrieks
Like metal, black
Deep breath
Blows
Heavy
Red yellow touch yet again
Heading… Forward… Towards…
You..?
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-04-06 09:55:21]
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Re: On the Road
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:59:52 AM AEST
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What an original poem!!! Filled with a lot of vivid description! Seems it's written from a personal expierance! Awesome write!
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Re: On the Road
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by silent on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:17:42 AM AEST
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Your poems are always so original and deep, the meaning i got out of this one is so very tragic and sad, but in another way i suppose nice, but i don't know another word for it. That was intensely deep for me, you say so much in such short lines, i learn alot from your style of writing, thanks for sharing.
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Re: On the Road
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by Soulpoetry on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:26:19 AM AEST
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| Great style of writing :) |
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Re: On the Road
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:17:12 PM AEST
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Spell-binding..... great style..
Jenni |
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Re: On the Road
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:04:15 PM AEST
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a great original write my reading speed was gaining momentum with the poem, excellent work
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Re: On the Road
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:37:07 PM AEST
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Very creative and awesome. Just a awesome piece of work. Loved it.
Arden
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Re: On the Road
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:32:50 PM AEST
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| realitys great images makes this a wonderful read:) hugs n' love nessa |
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