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Fading Life
Contributed by
SAT
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:11:13 PM in AEST
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I sit in my room
staring at the door
watching as my blood
drips to the floor
wishing he will come
to save my dying soul
before my fading life
has to pay its toll
can he save me now
only time will tell
whay cant he just come
im already going to hell
but what ive done
isnt even a crime
if only i thought twice
thered be a next time
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SAT
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2004-04-06 15:11:13]
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Re: Fading Life
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:18:25 PM AEST
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Oh please, don't let guys be the cause of this..... they just can't see everything that goes on in our heads. They sometimes misunderstand, just like we do. Please, dont let them give you so much pain.
And please, don't cause yourself any more harm. You're only making things worse.....
I really do care, though I don't even know you. Don't forget that, OK?
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Fading Life
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:12:34 PM AEST
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| i feel your pain and ur depression in your words.. all of us girls have been there... but you gotta pull through... wait for a guy who doesnt make you cry because if he does he's not the right guy... :) |
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Re: Fading Life
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:54:48 PM AEST
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Absolutly beautiful. I loved the comment you gave on my poem and I wanted to say thank you. You're a wonderful writer to! I love your poetry.
~Molly~ |
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