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Sinking
Contributed by
parkman
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:38:29 PM in AEST
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Drowning in my thoughts, whirlpool dragging me under
Trying to see clearly, trying not to surrender
Murky depth of my mind, hurting, tormenting
Sinking deeper as I slump, depression's fermenting
Bubbling, boiling, venemous pain, unlike any other
Shrouding myself in darkness, under a cover
Feel the agony of no control, over what I'm thinking
Cowering up in a ball, feel my life shrinking
There's no use fighting, I'm beaten, only one escape
Reach for the packet on the shelf, a razor blade I take
Run it swiftly across my wrist, neatly opening the vein
No more drowning in murky depth, torment or pain
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-04-06 17:38:29]
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Re: Sinking
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by LouisaMontagu on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:55:02 PM AEST
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So descriptive, it almost sucks you down..!!
Well Done I Liked, Yes, Yes I did..
Luv Louisa xx |
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Re: Sinking
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:00:52 PM AEST
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| That last stanza made me queasy. I wasn't prepared for it. Very powerful poem here... Kie |
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Re: Sinking
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:45:42 AM AEST
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| i feel for it... i really do |
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