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Dangerous Driving ( for Mark )
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dangerous Driving!!!!
I saw the danger, I saw the signs
but not my lane marked with lines
Night has fallen the hour is late
Undoing my belt, I accelerate
In my rear view my life will flash
check my mirrors, I wont crash
All the turnings pass me by
adrenaline my fuel, I know not why
I drift towards the central line
out of control, this exits mine
Im racing at speed its so unreal
my vision blurred, I lose the wheel
I cant see through these blinding tears
the road my path, I find each gear
The wind is rushing the tyres hot
there passes another sign!
I cant look back I missed that chance
now going for the redline,,,
With eyes closed and a tilted head
I breathed those words...Now im dead..!
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2004-04-06 17:51:53]
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Re: Dangerous Driving ( for Mark )
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:56:35 PM AEST
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| Dark with suicidal ideations and quite interesting to ponder......Kie |
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Re: Dangerous Driving ( for Mark )
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by Thumper0719 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:06:47 PM AEST
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| Awsome dude darkning! |
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Re: Dangerous Driving ( for Mark )
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by Coaster on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:21:35 PM AEST
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Liked the poem a lot! Thanks for posting.
Ryan |
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Re: Dangerous Driving ( for Mark )
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by Spike on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 05:46:24 AM AEST
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Marked with lines or lined with Mark? (its late...)
If love is a highway, I'm roadkill. If you're on the highway, I'm roadkill. Hmmm, an interesting intersection (no pun intended).
Ambiguous, but I still enjoyed it.
Spike |
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