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Separation
Contributed by
Soulpoetry
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:14:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In this life so full of sorrow,
We have laid our years in tears,
Could this last until tomorrow,
Or confront our childish fears.
To lost love through separation,
Whose remains we could not forge,
To get along with this frustration,
"Is our love life ready for?"
With no hopes to reconsider,
We'll remain as truthful friends.
In our lives so full of sorrow,
There will be no more ourselves.
By:
Peter .A (www.soulpoetry.cjb.net)
Copyright ©
Soulpoetry
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2004-04-06 18:14:27]
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Re: Separation
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:16:36 PM AEST
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i totally relate to this..It is very hard
Well done. |
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Re: Separation
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by ConfusedPancake on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:17:46 PM AEST
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| i like this poem's flow. it just rolls off the tip of the tongue and is easy to understand yet rather intriquate in presence. nicely done. |
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Re: Separation
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by Soulpoetry on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:25:47 PM AEST
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| Thank you for your comments! please visit my site www.soulpoetry.cjb.net |
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Re: Separation
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by Arrundel on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:59:37 PM AEST
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wow, that is very similar to something that happened in my life.
good job |
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Re: Separation
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:38:10 PM AEST
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| powerful write. written well. =] |
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