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Tanka I
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tanka
Mountain top glistens.
Snow on Mount Fuji shines white.
Beautiful picture!
Flowers at base are so bright.
Fields of mums frame this fine sight.
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ramfire
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2002-09-24 12:30:00]
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Re: Tanka I
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by aernby on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 12:47:39 PM AEST
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Yes! Good write.
I see what you have written.
aern |
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Re: Tanka I
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by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 01:09:29 PM AEST
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Hi aern,
Thanks for your comment. I'm really glad you like my poem. It's my first attempt at this kind of poetry.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Tanka I
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 02:42:05 PM AEST
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| oooh how cool that this short, simple poem created such a huge distinct picture....just BAM!!! it was there. |
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Re: Tanka I
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by Ramfire on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:10:52 AM AEST
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Hi Lia,
I'm glad you like my poem. It's my first attempt at writing this kind of poetry. Mount Fuji is such a beautiful mountain.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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