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and the angels cry
Contributed by
crimsondream
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:44:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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black nail polish on my dolls cut out hearts chanting calls faces burnt covered eyes neon pink in disguse crown of thorns tempting fate todays already far too late stitched wrists crusted blood to the floor with a thud to a stake staple my head into the fire therell be no dread scatter round ice will fall from my lips at my call voodoo games let me see what is that in the tree poison angel lifeless and pale drown in blood just inhale kissing wrist say goodbye and the angels cry and the angels cry
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Re: and the angels cry
(User Rating: 1 ) by ConfusedPancake on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:51:31 PM AEST (User
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that's a really good poem. really eerie and extremely well done. hard to imagine that you did it in only 3 minutes. i'm glad you wrote it though. |
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Re: and the angels cry
(User Rating: 1 ) by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:51:07 AM AEST (User
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Nice poem.. deeep scarey emotions |
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Re: and the angels cry
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:01:51 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem.. I really liked the flow of it and I really liked the ending great job!!
peace and hope
JENNA |
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